Proofread then rewrite the first sentence, having identified and corrected any spelling and punctuation errors.
Proofread then rewrite the second sentence using the CUPS editing checklist. Once you have done this, see if you can make the sentence more descriptive.
Using some of the words from the Word Wall, write your own scintillating sentence about the animals featured featured in the film clip. Once you have written your sentence, proofread it using the CUPS editing checklist.
1) the crab was mesmerised by the cuttlefish’s constantly changing colurs
2) In the depths of the pacific ocean the cuttlefish propelled itself forword by squirting a jets of water out of its body.