Inspired by nature | KS2 | Year 4 | Grammar
Commas for lists: golden eagle
Rewrite the first sentence by replacing the unnecessary ‘ands’ with commas.
Rewrite the second sentence and change one of the actions in the list. Don’t forget to put the commas in the correct places!
Using some of the descriptive words from the Word Wall, write your own scintillating sentence about the golden eagle featured in the film clip. Your sentence must include a list of 3 or more actions or items.
1) Golden eagles have a big wingspan and a longish tail and large eyes and a relatively small head.
2) Before landing on the falconer’s glove, Tilly had flown over a loch, soared at a great height and grabbed a robotic hare with her talons.