Inspired by nature | KS2 | Year 4 | Grammar
Proofreading: Darwin’s bark spider
Proofread then rewrite the first sentence, having identified and corrected any spelling and punctuation errors.
Proofread then rewrite the second sentence using the CUPS editing checklist. Once you have done this, see if you can make the sentence more descriptive.
Using some of the words from the Word Wall, write your own scintillating sentence about the Darwin’s bark spider featured in the film clip. Once you have written your sentence, proofread it using the CUPS editing checklist.
1) the bark spiders skilfully weeved her web over the fast flowing river
2) In a remote corner of madagascar two bark spiders where racing towards each other along a silk line