Inspired by nature | KS2 | Year 6 | Grammar
Proofreading: six-plumed bird of paradise
Right words, wrong order! Organise the first sentence so that it makes sense, using the correct spellings and punctuation.
The second sentence needs to be proofread. There are both spelling and punctuation errors that need correcting. Once you have done this, see if you can make one further improvement to the sentence.
Using some of the words from the Word Wall, write your own scintillating multi-clause sentence about the six-plumed bird of paradise featured in the film clip. Once you have written your sentence, proofread it for punctuation and spelling errors.
1) the male boped As his breastplate flashed colours diffrent
2) As the choosy females took there seats on a nearby branch the eyecatching male threw some mesmurising moves.